Short Stories

We, the contributors on this site have made the decision to each post a short story we wrote on this blog.
The short stories will probably be posted today or in the next few days. Mine (Rachel's) is most likely to be posted today or Saturday, for Mickey's I have no idea what hers is. They might not be that good, I'm not really sure about mine, but please comment on what you think, if there is anything we could do to make them better. Thank you.